tasks
xiaomai5
September 24, 2013 at 10:34 AM posted in General DiscussionHi CP,
I haven't had a task feedback for maybe around a week now.. is this because you are all celebrating 中秋节? :)
If so that is absolutely fine! I was just hoping that my tasks have not been lost as I have sent 3-4 now.
谢谢!
xiaomai6
October 14, 2013 at 12:17 PM
非常谢谢！:-)
很有用为帮助我的学习。
Your IT dept. have not replied to me so going forwards I don't know what to do?!
I guess I will just message you that I have completed a task and then post it on the board for everyone to see!
There seems to be no other solution!
再次感谢
lujiaojie
October 14, 2013 at 12:28 AM
1 “平时是长方形”听起来有点奇怪，要说“一般是长方形”。
2 我觉得我的中文水平是差不多中级。（我觉得我的中文水平差不多是中级）.
语法是另的问题加油学习。(语法是另外一个问题。也需要加油学习）
其它都很好！
3 这种虫子我选是一个瓢虫。（我选的这种虫子是“瓢虫”。）
它很小，有六条腿子，还有一般是红色和黑色颜色。（它很小，有六条腿，一般是红色和黑色的。）
一般它们有几斑。（一般它们有几个斑。）
发射化学（要说：发射化学物质）
化学的味道非常可怕（化学物质的味道非常可怕。）
4 “导致一个打扫的工作”不太自然，“导致”比较正式，可以说：家里到处都是它的毛，害得我要经常打扫。
“不用弟我的狗”，应该是“剃”，你少了右边的偏旁，这个部分是表义的，叫“立刀旁”，表示是用“刀”做这件事。
5 多数年轻人住在房子。（有点奇怪，可以说：多数年轻人租房子住。）
平时两个人的同性住在一起。（可以说：一般同性的两个人住在一起。）
6 她提出了一些的建议。（一些后面不需要”的“。可以说：她提出了一些建议。）
如果有，那小程的室友可能攀登回。（”攀登“比较正式，可以说：那小程的室友可以从窗户爬进去。）
其他的都很好！
xiaomai6
October 12, 2013 at 03:33 PM
没收到了:( I haven't had a reply from CP tech dept. What can we do? It's so annoying to be affected by this problem :( Really would like your feedback on the 6 tasks!
podster
October 11, 2013 at 07:49 AM
Have you written to customer support? I don't think they monitor the community comments. You may want to email them directly.
xiaomai6
October 10, 2013 at 08:04 AM
sorry.. matthew_appleyard@hotmail.CO.UK
But this is what my account has been set to all the time. I don't understand why it is not working.
xiaomai6
October 10, 2013 at 08:02 AM
Hi:) So, I haven't received lots of homeworks? :(
I am missing:
renting appartment
roommate
shaving dogs
chinese placement
shapes
fleas
I am set-up to receive emails so not sure why it isn't working.
My email is matthew_appleyard@hotmail.com.
Please can you help?
Thanks
lujiaojie
October 10, 2013 at 12:58 AM
xiaomai6 completed the task for Intermediate » Shaven Dog
1 day ago from Web
To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie
这个收到了吗？
lujiaojie
October 10, 2013 at 12:55 AM
Matthew Appleyard completed the task for Intermediate » Roommate Hunting
October 1, 2013 from Web
To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie
Matthew Appleyard completed the task for Intermediate » Calling the Locksmith
October 1, 2013 from Web
To be Reviewed by Lu Jiaojie
这2个没收到？
RJ
October 12, 2013 at 09:09 PM
btw- pulling crackers is evidently a UK/commonwealth country thing. I had to look it up. Never heard of it before so it may be a mystery in China as well.
xiaomai5
September 27, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Also Connie I think you make one small mistake.. I was asking about the task feedback for 组房子 but under "renting" you have written about me rushing to the airport?! This was a different task! Do you need me to re-send my 组房子作业？
谢谢！
xiaomai5
September 27, 2013 at 10:19 PM
@ Connie, 非常谢谢发了我两个作业 :)
Just two last questions! In Xmas homework I meant to say "we pull crackers with each other". 怎么说中文? 我写 "饼干" - 很傻了!
还有在出差作业里, 我要说"They must visit a lot of factories in a short space of time" - 怎么说中文?
谢谢!
connie
September 27, 2013 at 04:29 AM
renting,
1. 有一次，我要去机场，很急。中国司机很会开车。他开车的技术很好。
2. 因为一些司机会告诉小偷你的家里没人。
connie
September 27, 2013 at 04:27 AM
Xmas festival，
修改了一下：
在我们国家有一个传统节日是圣诞节。
我们过这个节日的时候，有很大的家庭聚餐（通常是火鸡），还会互相送礼。
这个节日有很多传统，比如说，有些人会站在槲寄生下面亲吻，（和相拉饼干？这个什么？我看不懂哦。）
在这个节日里，公司会给员工发东西，我现在的公司给我发了一张20英镑的礼品卡，我以前的公司给我发了一瓶香槟酒。（"员工"的"员"写错了哦，要注意下。）
xiaomai5
September 26, 2013 at 02:11 PM
re the business trip homework...one sentence you said you were not sure what I was trying to say! I wanted to say: They must visit a lot of factories in a short space of time. Thank you :)
xiaomai5
September 26, 2013 at 09:58 AM
thank you for all the feeback, I will work through this now. How do I choose to receive emails? Please can you change this? I want to receive emails!! Also there is still two more homeworks on renting and Xmas festival missing. Do you need me to re-send these? Thank you so much :)
lujiaojie
September 26, 2013 at 02:43 AM
nutritional content labels
我看一下，后面上有一个营养成分表。（可以说：我看了一下，后面有一个营养成分表。 “了”表示你看过了，“后面”不需要“上”）
脂肪是……，极高了。（呵呵，极高了像古代汉语，现在我们说：高极了！）
其他的很好！
Business trip
我从没来出差。要说：我从来没出过差。（出差是离合词）
他们中短时间应该看到很多工厂。（这句我不太明白，读起来有点奇怪。）
他们可以报消为机票和酒店。（这句中文的语序要说：他们可以报销机票和酒店的费用。不用“为”）
旅游的时候，我跟家人用skype为了联系。（这句也和英文不一样，可以说：旅游的时候，我跟家人用skype联系。不需要“为了”。）
monkey show
今天写得太好了！没有错误！water light show可以说“水光表演”。
继续努力哦！
lujiaojie
September 26, 2013 at 02:37 AM
我想发给你，但是没有你的email.
I just saw"Sorry, this user has chosen to receive no emails. "
xiaomai5
September 25, 2013 at 08:01 AM
哎呀！好像我的email address错了。现在我改变了。
可不可以再发我? 谢谢!
Homeworks I am missing are:
Business trip one (出差), monkey show (耍猴), nutritional content labels, renting and Xmas festival one. So five in total! If you can send me again to the corrected email I will be so happy to receive them :) I have corrected my email on the system now.
非常谢谢!
lujiaojie
October 03, 2013 at 12:31 PM刚刚批改了你两个tasks,一个”开锁“，一个”租房子“，收到了吗？收到的话请告诉我一下。谢谢！